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    hey

    what should i include in a letter asking for sponcership on a car??

    thanks

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    Proper spelling might help too
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    Proper English.

    Grammar! Sponsorship! not sponcership. Seriously use Google or some online dictionary and proof read it two times then get two other people whom have completed high school to proof read it.

    If an inept person incapable of stringing a few words together asked me for money I would burn the letter.

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    - what they will get out of sponsering you?
    - will you be a good ambassador for their product?

    ps. what is this reagarding, i may be able to help more if you let us know.
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    What are you offering in return? When you approach somebody seeking sponsorship, it's usually a two-way street and the prospective sponsor will need to know how he or she benefits by sponsoring you.

    Any request for sponsorship should be very professionally prepared - from your grammar, I doubt that you should attempt it - get someone who can structure a properly written request and make sure you stress the benefits to the sponsor as a major part of your request.

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    Write a letter requesting a formal presentation in regards to sponsorship, then attend their offices and make your pitch

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    It's for my commodore. im looking for sponsorship because i cant really afford to paint up my car like the one i want and it will have their logos anyway it i can.

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    Quote Originally Posted by vkcommo View Post
    It's for my commodore. im looking for sponsorship because i cant really afford to paint up my car like the one i want and it will have their logos anyway it i can.
    Is there anything special about your car? Is it going to be a show car, have you built cars muscle before? Is it going to be a drag car thats going to pull 5-9 sec?. Your a good race car driver and intend to race it. If you can't answer yes to any of them I don't like you chances.

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    Quote Originally Posted by badaz View Post
    Is there anything special about your car? Is it going to be a show car, have you built cars muscle before? Is it going to be a drag car thats going to pull 5-9 sec?. Your a good race car driver and intend to race it. If you can't answer yes to any of them I don't like you chances.
    He is going to be driving to school with it. Imaging all the publicity that he will get from there.




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    so you want to get sponsored so you can get a free respray, i really doubt it would happen, unless you have a name for yourself, i doubt it would be worth it for them.

    try this lol DIY Painting your car with rollers

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    Quote Originally Posted by vkcommo View Post
    they wont see it past the smoke
    Got some engine problems aye. nothing worse than a car with smoke pouring out of the grill and around the bonnet especially when all your mates are around and worse the entire school.

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    nevermind, delete this lol
    Last edited by ruggj; 04-09-2009 at 10:26 PM. Reason: i realised what i typed was really retarted

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    Quote Originally Posted by ruggj View Post
    i realised what i typed was really retarted
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    Quote Originally Posted by ruggj View Post
    i realised what i typed was really retarted
    If only all people thought like that




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    Quote Originally Posted by fuzzy2308 View Post
    Got some engine problems aye. nothing worse than a car with smoke pouring out of the grill and around the bonnet especially when all your mates are around and worse the entire school.
    im talking more tire smoke.. lol

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    Good luck with that....So whats actually done to it? To make it worth the sponsors while?

    Better save some money for a paint job....You won't be getting a free one anytime soon!

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    It sounds like a really stupid idea. Give it a miss and earn the money to have the paint job done like most people do.

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    yerr. but its changing

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