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Poetry and Song Writing

bluehighway

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'Thoughts'
The thought, I thought has flown .... and left me here all alone,
Whenceforth did it go !..... I most earnestly will never know,
Alas,... it has not been long ,but theres another thought.... just GONE! ...lol
 

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The perfect height for holding tight
The perfect height to dance
Perfect eyes pierce my soul and melt me with a glance
Perfect face beguiling
You're living breathing art
Perfection in a woman
Perfection stole my heart
 

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Winner winner chicken dinner.
 

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I made pasta tonight and it was too thin.

I like the thick stuff better than the thin stuff.
I like the thick stuff better than the thin stuff.
I like the thick stuff better than the thin stuff.

Thanks all GN.
 

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You didn't write that yourself:)

And sadly it's not the first time I've plagiarised someone else's work.

I did write a great poem once but my teacher didn't think so, so the next year I used song lyrics and got a reasonable pass mark.

Theme's the breaks!
 
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